The Official Writing Challenge
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Clever and well-written.

I'm not sure why you had the characters signing, as deafness didn't seem to be significant to the plot. I kept waiting for it to tie in somehow, so it left me feeling puzzled.

I love the outside the box approach to the topic, which then ended up right there in the box after all! Cute.
Original approach. I wasn't sure why a teenager with high standards of cleanliness had all that dust on the curtains to begin with...that threw me. Nice touches of humor with the Ink...
Cute story, but how could she hear the car in the driveway if she's deaf?
A creative take on the topic.