The Official Writing Challenge
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02/20/09
This is a pleasant and entertaining read, with a gently humorous feel.

You may have sidestepped the intention of the topic a bit by using it as a given name...

...but it was certainly a unique and refreshing entry.
Interesting sweet story. Too bad you'll lose points for not being on topic as the theme for the quarter is Countries Around the World. Very creative writing.
02/22/09
A unique story. Light on topic, but well-written and cute.