The Official Writing Challenge
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Fascinating facts. It would be an easier read if the material was separated into several paragraphs.
02/20/09
You've obviously done your research.

For the next "geographic" topic, would you consider taking a fact or two and spinning a story from them? You may find that more readers are interested in a piece with some human interest in addition to the facts.

Thanks for all the hard work you put into this!
Loaded with information, though difficult to read without paragraphs. It felt like I was reading an encyclopedia which isn't quite the purpose of the Challenge. Thanks for all the research you did.
02/23/09
I concur with the other comments. Take time to read other challenge entries to develop a sense of the type of writing people submit here.