The Official Writing Challenge
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02/13/09
Wonderful message here--nothing is impossible with Jesus. If this is a true story about your mother, then you are certainly aware of His miraculous powers.
Lovely story. Very moving.
Love,
Norms
02/16/09
Oh, what an amazing story! This felt true, and I wonder if it i. Excellent characterization and storytelling.
Do you know what I love about your writing? In everything you've written in first person, it is so real.

The story reads like a memoir. Great writing!
02/17/09
Oooh, very good! I wondered if someone would use Eva Peron in their story somehow, and I just love that musical. That you found a way to give it a beautiful spiritual lesson is marvelous.
02/18/09
Awesome story and awesome writing. Very interesting.
02/18/09
Moving and emotional. Beautiful entry!
With great skill, your transformed yourself into the character of a 55 year old. Excellent story.
Absolutely wonderful, as usual! I loved how it ended!
02/18/09
Absolutely fantastic! Well done!
It's pieces like this that demonstrate why you are in the masters level. :)

I did not expect the spiritual twist at the end. Very nice, Leah!