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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: South America (02/05/09)

TITLE: Hope for My Country
By Leah Nichols


The movie ends, and I am weeping.

Weeping for my country, weeping for my people, weeping for the hopelessness in our land. Weeping because I remember that day.

* * * * *

Rain falls from the sky, drenching the people. They line the streets, pressing in from all sides. Each one waits for their opportunity to pass through the doors. They clutch their candles and their flowers, small tokens of the depth of love they feel for her.

Santa Evita.

To the bewildered officials that stand at the doors, this impassioned display of affection makes no sense. But they do not love her as we do.

We slowly move forward in the line, my mother weeping softly. I know that she reveres the First Lady as a saint. For I remember the smell of the office, and my mother clinging to her crutches, her crippled legs nearly crumbling beneath her as doña María Duarte de Perón embraced her with a kiss. With a quickly scribbled signature, she gave my mother a wheelchair.

And now she is dead.

* * * * *

All of our hopes died that day. Thousands mourned for days on end, filing one by one alongside her embalmed body, praying for her soul, and our own deliverance. For those few years, while she gave away her riches to the poor, we believed in hope. We believed that the people mattered, even to those who governed.

Forty-five years later, we have learned: no, we do not matter.

Since the days of Eva Perón, unstable governments and volatile economic conditions only reflect the disarray of political parties fighting for power in Argentina under every banner imaginable. But for the people, the descamisados, only she understood.

That is why my mother still prays to her. The old broken wheelchair stands next to a picture and a lighted candle. Perhaps her Santa Evita will look down from heaven and bless the people once again.

The Americans have captured the scene well. Their movie stirs up emotion within me; emotion I had left lying dormant beneath my driven business demeanor.

I have not called my mother for several months, and in this moment I feel compelled. “¿Mama?” I wipe the tear from my cheek.

“¡Mijo!” she exclaims. “¡Gloria a Diós! You must come to see me. I have something to tell you – ¡muy importante!”

“What, Mama?”

“Come, mijo,” she states simply, and hangs up.

I cannot imagine what may have filled her voice with such joy. The remainder of my childhood she had lived with such sorrow that I had run from home to escape the tears. Pursuing my dreams, succeeding in business, working my way to the top, but leaving the tears behind me. No, the people do not matter. If we want something, we must work for it. That is what separates me from my mother. She believes in the hope that someone else will deliver her. Either Santa Evita, Santa María, or perhaps some other deliverer.

The house on the outskirts of Buenos Aires looks the same, except for new flowers in the garden. I push the door open and walk toward the kitchen, expecting to find my mother there.

“Mijo.” My mother's voice stops me in the middle of the living room. She is standing by the fireplace.

She is standing by the fireplace.

“¡Mama! You are standing!” My own legs nearly buckle beneath me.

She laughs aloud. “Sí, mijo, I must tell you. Last week I went to see a preacher named Carlos. He taught us that we only need to ask of God for healing. You know I prayed to the saints for many years, but they did not help me. So when I prayed to Jesus, my legs felt burning, and I believed that I would be healed if I stand. So, here I am – I do not need the wheelchair anymore. And I pray to Jesus now.”

I am speechless. My mother stands in front of me, and this I have never seen in all my fifty-four years. Joy shines from her face, sorrow no longer present. All this because of Jesus?

And as she explains the way of life to me, I begin to see.

Yes, there is hope for my country.

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Charla Diehl 02/13/09
Wonderful message here--nothing is impossible with Jesus. If this is a true story about your mother, then you are certainly aware of His miraculous powers.
Norma-Anne Hough02/15/09
Lovely story. Very moving.
Joanne Sher 02/16/09
Oh, what an amazing story! This felt true, and I wonder if it i. Excellent characterization and storytelling.
Karlene Jacobsen02/16/09
Do you know what I love about your writing? In everything you've written in first person, it is so real.

The story reads like a memoir. Great writing!
Jan Ackerson 02/17/09
Oooh, very good! I wondered if someone would use Eva Peron in their story somehow, and I just love that musical. That you found a way to give it a beautiful spiritual lesson is marvelous.
Laury Hubrich 02/18/09
Awesome story and awesome writing. Very interesting.
Glynis Becker02/18/09
Moving and emotional. Beautiful entry!
Verna Cole Mitchell 02/18/09
With great skill, your transformed yourself into the character of a 55 year old. Excellent story.
Valarie Sullivan02/18/09
Absolutely wonderful, as usual! I loved how it ended!
Chely Roach02/18/09
Absolutely fantastic! Well done!
Joshua Janoski03/26/09
It's pieces like this that demonstrate why you are in the masters level. :)

I did not expect the spiritual twist at the end. Very nice, Leah!