The Official Writing Challenge
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02/12/09
I love Walter (and your title). Funny how the cultural differences can get us in trouble sometimes. I'm pretty sure Walter had it figured out by the time he returned to Brazil. I enjoyed this a lot.
02/12/09
I felt as if I knew Walter. Poor guy! He had no idea...and sometimes neither do we. Listening is good. Great story.
02/17/09
Excellent first-person narrative that becomes a little lesson for us all. Very well done.
Your story with a message was peppered with interesting information about Brazil. Very well done.
02/18/09
Your descriptions of the MC were so clear that I felt as if I had watched a video and seen him and how he moved and acted! Nice!
02/18/09
Very good lesson here tucked into a story with great descriptions. Good job!
Thanks for the reminder that I need to see people as Jesus does.
Nice telling of this young man's POV about his home and some adjustments while being in the USA. :)