The Official Writing Challenge
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02/12/09
I can relate to this entry. I'm rounding my own personal Horn. It's not easy but I know when I get to the other side I will be better for it. Awesome story and I like the history lesson. Very good writing!
Lovely story. Well told. You held my attention to the end.
Blessings,
Norms
02/16/09
Excellent extended metaphor--we've all had to 'round the horn in our lives. Very, very good!
02/16/09
What a beautiful, compelling story. Lovely.
Great story. Held me captive. Good Job!!
02/17/09
Yay! I feel like cheering after that roller coaster ride. The minister weathering his inner storm as the ship weathers the outer storm was wonderful, and the Scriptures perfect.
02/19/09
Oh wow, this is really great. So creative. Congratulations on being Highly Commended.
You kept me interested in finding out what would happen next. I did not know about Cape Horn, so this provided me an enjoyable story along with an interesting history lesson. It's one of those stories that keeps you on the edge till the very end. Thanks for sharing.