The Official Writing Challenge
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02/13/09
Well-written story. I could picture what was happening and feel the character's emotions.

On a side note...What an interesting coincidence that the MC for my challenge entry this week has the same name (Nalini). PM me for the title, if you'd like.
02/14/09
Excellent descriptions, and an extremely engaging tale! Very well-told.
02/18/09
WOW! This is amazing! Lots of good descriptions and you've certainly done your research! I remember hearing stories of Choorile and Jumbees. You brought to life this special story. So glad it ended the way it did. ^_^ Good job!