The Official Writing Challenge
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02/12/09
The imagery in this poem is excellent. In my opinion, the structure of the piece makes it a bit difficult to read. I liked how you tied the themes of each stanza together.
02/16/09
This is an interesting piece. You allowed us to taste, hear, and see the land. Nice.
Oh, excellent... You captured a lot of beauty in this poem...