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02/12/09
Fascinating story from a different and unexpected point of view.
02/13/09
Just fascinating. I was so engaged in the characters and storyline!
02/15/09
This unfolds so warmly. It takes me back to my Iowa days. You have a good understanding of contour farming. :) This is so interesting and now I know my first Portuguese word.
What a unique entry. I really enjoyed this.
02/16/09
I enjoyed this very much. The 'author's note' was the perfect extra.
You did a wonderful job with characterization in your article. I felt like I knew Ellen (and you) very well. I really enjoyed reading this.
02/17/09
Beautiful writing, Dee. I love how you described Ellen with such tenderness.
02/18/09
Oh! I love this. It's even better knowing it's true. Thank you for sharing. Awesome writing.
Such a rich personal narrative. I enjoyed reading it. :)
I really felt like I was there listening to their conversation...good dialogue!
03/17/09
well said and thanks for sharing this moment.