The Official Writing Challenge
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07/25/05
This sounds like the beginning of a novel. I want to know more. Did Stace and Junior escape? You have me hooked.
07/25/05
This story is a little more intense than the title suggests.
I didn't expect deceit from Junior! I agree that this is just waiting for further development. Great character development so far - I just want to know what happens next!
07/27/05
Great characters who jump off the page. Well written story that had me on the edge of my seat to the end.
07/27/05
Murphy's Law is a very good title befitting the story. The character's were right out there, and vivid descriptions. Eliciting emotional responses from the readers. Great job. Leaves you wanting to hear more details.
God bless ya, littlelight
07/28/05
Ooooh. This was good. You hooked me - I want to know what happens.
Excellent, creative writing.
Blessings, Lynda
Oooh! You've got me waiting now. I'd like to read the rest of the story...Thanks for sharing!
Amen to all of the above comments!
07/29/05
I agree with the above comments. A really intriguing story.
07/30/05
Excellent writing and a captivating story!
07/30/05
Nice little snip of a larger piece. Good writing and polishing. I like it!