The Official Writing Challenge
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02/12/09
Beautifully written. I felt like I was right there with the MC, seeing what she saw and feeling her emotions.
02/16/09
Very nice. I love the descriptions and the way God spoke to this woman's heart. Nice job.
02/17/09
Beautiful, and the last fourth of it was extremely touching. Lovely.
02/17/09
You never feel the need to explain the whys of your MC's predicaments, and I think that makes your stories AND your MCs so interesting! I love the line about vanity not allowing her to go without mascara - it made me smile cuz it's so true. ;) Toward the end the wonderful, beautiful lines come one after another as she lets the Spirit overcome her. Super job, Sara!
02/18/09
Beautiful and emotional. I enjoyed this very much!
Girl, your writing gets better all the time. You take us on a beautiful journey of surrender with lyrical words.
02/19/09
Just beautiful. Gorgeous - incredible descriptions, girlie!
02/19/09
This is brilliant. Well done!