The Official Writing Challenge
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02/12/09
This piece had me riveted throughout. Great descriptions and narrative.
02/13/09
You conveyed a lot of emotion in a few words. Well done.
02/18/09
Your story drew me in and held my attention to the end. I loved Agusto's cry to Mary; so realistic in a society where Christianity is so often a veneer on top of all sorts of other belief systems! The writing flowed well, the descriptions were vivid and nothing seemed out of place. Very well done indeed!