The Official Writing Challenge
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02/13/09
This drew me right in. Your poem was lovely and even more lovely that you became friends. Beautiful!
02/16/09
What an awesome story. I have to believe it's true. Hope so anyway. :) Good job.
02/18/09
A lovely story, and the way you included the poem was very clever. I'm glad the girl's disability did not get in the way of friendship. Nicely written. One small negative, the 1st line of the 3rd paragraph doesn't seem to make sense. I suspect there is a typo, that 'only' ought to be 'other'. It is a small thing, but was a distraction when I read your entry. I find that reading my work aloud, and asking family members to cast an eye over it helps to weed out these irritating little errors! But overall I really enjoyed reading this heart-warming story. Thanks for writing.