The Official Writing Challenge
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02/06/09
Great story. That last line was especially good.
02/06/09
Beautifully written. The last line is perfect.
I loved the last line, too. It sums up the entire piece.
This definitely deserves EC.
I was just looking through the past articles; it's on to masters for you isn't it?
Congratulations again. Your writing is amazing!
02/14/09
I love this well-written story........full of suspense, compassion and brotherly love. Congratulations!