The Official Writing Challenge
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Lots of information, beautifully packaged, about the theme. Very good.
Awesome story. I felt like one of your kids, sitting on the edge of my seat listening. But I wanted them to scoot over so I could see the pictures. ugh... (smile) but anyway, you described it well even without the pictures:)
Loved the way you did the kids, all curiosity and 'want to do it, too!'. Loved it!
With a title like this I couldn't NOT read on! Well told. I learned a lot. I also loved the way the kids wanted to be there, even though the memories for the Mum were not as romantic as she managed to make them sound.
Adorable! So much info packed into here, great dialogue - loved the part where he's picking at his scab, it just "told" the reader so much. Don't they have milk in plastic bags in the U.S.?????? The things we learn from each other!