The Official Writing Challenge
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02/06/09
A lovely message in this cute story!
02/09/09
Really enjoyed the intimate dialogue these two had. Nice story.
02/09/09
This was a really cute story of father and daughter spending a day together. One thing I didn't understand though was, she wanted him to read the signs to her, yet she said she may write a story about it for her teacher.
I loved the story and the dialogue!
02/09/09
I can see myself having fun at the border just like Nattie did. :) And what a smart little girl she is! I enjoyed reading about her splendid day with her dad.
02/10/09
Very precious relationship between the father and daughter here.

There were times when the 6-year-old seemed to say things that were beyond her years.

I love the last bit, about going to Canada 50 times. Really cute!