The Official Writing Challenge
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02/05/09
The images you create with the words chosen are just breath taking. It was as if I was right there with him. Beautiful story with a deep and redemptive message.
02/05/09
Imagery well applied. Very nice.
Great message.
Out of your wonderfully descriptive words emerges a wonderful message.
02/06/09
I relate to God much easier when I'm surrounded by His magnificent creation. That said, I love the setting for your story and the emotions, thoughts and insight God's nature brought forth in the MC. Great story and inspiring message.
02/07/09
Beautifully descriptive and poignant. Wonderful.
Your connection of the Canadian wilderness to your MC's son's condition were incredible. I loved the imagery expressed here.
02/14/09
Oh this was beautiful. So well written and descriptive. Congrats on your placing!