The Official Writing Challenge
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02/05/09
An adorable story. I enjoyed it.
02/06/09
Good story, and the hint of warning about the environment was apt.
02/09/09
Great title--and this would make a good children's book, even something to add to a science curriculum. Very well done.
02/09/09
Cute story. I too think this would be a good children's story. I enjoyed the mc's perspective of living in a zoo, and the input from his new friends. Great idea!
02/09/09
Bad humans! Good bears! Great story!
And a love story too? Nanook was such a kindly bear...
I loved the mc's perspective, from behind the fence.
02/09/09
I love the pov. Very original!
02/10/09
Delightful! I agree, this would make a great children's story. I could even see a children's movie!
02/11/09
Oooohhhh, I liked this one! Great MC voice, some almost haunting environmental nostalgia and a wee little love story. All the right elements wrapped up so well.
02/11/09
Ohh very cute. I liked it! I especially like the ending best of all the 'craving for fish heads'. lol. You did this very well! ^_^
Perfect title for a very creative POV!
02/12/09
I loved this creative environmental take on the topic! Well done.
Your story is delightful. I love your mc's voice. :-)