The Official Writing Challenge
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You might have been better not to have mentioned FW and writing this piece for the Challenge. However, having said that, this is a wonderful tribute and your last paragraph is superb.
This is good but would be so much better if you would have focused completely on Del and Jenny only and made a story out of it maybe. Kept it generic so you could try to get it published sometime. Very nice job. You did a great job describing this couple.