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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: The United Kingdom (01/22/09)

TITLE: From Wilberforce to Obama
By Sonya Leigh
01/29/09


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Dear President Obama,


I pray this letter finds you well, particularly after I impart to you from whence it comes. Though we have never met, the whisperings of your election have found their way to my tomb at none other than the North Transept of Westminster Abbey.


Please know that I am in earnest when I say that writing this letter alarms me just as much receiving it alarms you. Imagine my surprise when a Voice from Heaven summoned me to “execute yet one more imperative, of utmost importance.” Indeed, when I first discovered that I had been summoned from the dead, only to arrive in the year 2009, I imagined it to be merely a dream from the afterlife.


Oh, but how my ears were blessed, as though hearing soft sounds of silk flapping in a gentle breeze, when the momentous occasion of January 20, 2009 was confirmed as true —I can hardly believe it even as I pen the words—the swearing in of a Negro president to serve our America, as it were.


It can never be deemed too long ago that America and Great Britain shared the common shame of slavery. In that abhorrent trade of our time, many of the slaves were treated as cattle—nay—not even as such, but cast into the lowest depths of a ship, chained two by two and treated with the same regard as vile excrement, to be discarded into the sea with ease as one would cast off bodily waste.


I am sure you are aware, Mr. President, of the process which took place in the House of Commons in the year 1789, where I, as inadequate and fearful as imaginable, wholeheartedly led the charge for the abolition of the slave trade.


The scales of hell must have covered the eyes of men then, who were able to violently sever men and women from their beloved country as they were overwrought with tears. Likewise a deafness stole away the pity of men’s ears, even when they heard the haunting songs of the slaves, born out of their sorrow and grief, knowing all the while that their fellow human beings were suffering irremediable losses at their own bloody hands.


But we were all as guilty as they. For the waging of such a war for the abolition of the slave trade had to begin at this level of culpability, without whose solidarity of guilt we could not have stood against evil as one; rather we would have been caught in an unresolved cycle of blame.


Mr. President, I am now asking you for the same measure of compassion that overturned such a horrible injustice then: to repeal and revoke an equally condemnable injustice being carried out now. I speak of the hardened men and women of today who conceal themselves in the shadows of blame, while millions of unborn children are being murdered in that most inconceivable of horrors, abortion.


The bloodiest, deadliest of wars was fought upon your own soil not long ago—brother against brother—to abolish slavery. Oh, what lives were sacrificed to emancipate our fellow man, all because it was right and true to speak for those without a voice, to deliver those who were in bondage, to protect the inalienable rights of those men and women whose gifts and talents had been cut short by their oppressors. Yet only two short centuries passed, a moment in time, before we all became guilty of blood once again.


We spat out reprehensible reasoning then to justify those atrocities, and now we vomit the same reasoning upon our unborn children, the most innocent of the human race.


Mr. President, I implore you to scrutinize the similarities of these two indictments against us, for what is being done now has its roots in the same act of supreme selfishness as it did then. It was out of pure self-indulgence that men desired to own slaves, that they could spend on pleasure and lighten their own burdens by placing it on the backs of others.


Likewise, today, we seek to escape the responsibility of life. However, just as we could not exculpate ourselves then, neither can we discharge ourselves now from the murder of innocent lives, created by God Almighty. I appeal to you to speak on behalf of the unborn, to not allow the blood of innocents to linger upon the hands of America and Britain any longer.


I await your reply.


Sincerely,
William Wilberforce



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Anita Vander Elst01/29/09
Wow! Excellently expressed in every way. Love that you used Wilberforce as the voice of your MC. I hope you'll send this on to the White House after this weekly challenge is over.
Helen Paynter01/29/09
Oh, excellent!
I love this - creative imagination, good writing, and a passion for justice. Write on, my friend!
Diana Dart 01/29/09
Excellent, well written, creative and bang on.
Jan Ackerson 01/30/09
This stunned me with its outstanding craftsmanship, but what I loved most about it was its humility and respctfulness when addressing a very passionate issue. This is a rare gem of an entry.
Sheri Gordon01/30/09
Wow. This is awesome. The writing style seemed authentic, and the passion so pure. Excellent, excellent voice.
Chely Roach01/30/09
Bravo, my friend. This was masterfully written, with perfectly poised passion about a delicate and dividing issue. Superb.
Myrna Noyes02/01/09
Wow! Very impressive treatment of two delicate subjects here! I am a great admirer of Wilberforce and am pleased to see him "star" in your well-executed story! :)
Charla Diehl 02/02/09
Thank you for this powerfully timely piece. Having Wilberforce as your MC was a brilliant choice, and I hope you send this on to the Whitehouse. You handled the subjects of slavery and abortion in a tactful, respectful way--Great job.
Mona Purvis02/02/09
Simply wonderfully written, full of passion and truth. Who could offer a response to the contrary? And yet, this goes on in our world today.
Powerful argument "from the grave".
Gerald Shuler 02/03/09
It has all been said and I agree... masterful writing.
Connie Dixon02/03/09
I love the perspective of your mc, such a creative view. And the message is a good one, I had never compared the horror of abortion to that of slavery, but murder is murder, yes? Thank you for reminding us of our responsibility to life, through your letter to our president.
Karlene Jacobsen 02/03/09
Imaginative! It would totally freak me out if I received a letter from a man dead 200+ years. YIKES! It would get my attention though. Nice job!
Bryan Ridenour02/03/09
Superb writing! Two thumbs up!
Valarie Sullivan02/03/09
I agree with Lisa, the tone and cadence and even word choices reflect the era that Wilberforce lived in. That made this letter very believable.
c clemons02/04/09
I cannot disagree that the tone and writing skills here were superb, but I will not EVER agree that the comparison of slavery and abortion are on the same level. Equally vile? Yes, but if anyone thinks that slavery has been totally abolished (in the United States) then you need to think again. What happen in slavery still affects this generation today. You read a constitution that was written over 200 years ago, that said All Men created equal and it takes 200 plus years for a African-American to get elected. The US Senate still only has one Black American. I am truly disappointed that so few actuallly get it.
Sonya Leigh02/04/09
I agree with C. Clemons that it has taken an unjustifiable amount of time for racial equality to be truly established in these United States.

But using the same argument, I pose this question: How many generations to come will the choice of abortion affect before equal rights is extended to our unborn? All racially induced hate crimes and wars combined over the last 200 years do not even touch the hem of the millions of lives lost to abortion since its relatively brief but rampant inception in our world.

This is not a separate issue from slavery or any other human rights issue in the world; this war is the one and same overall fight for the sanctity of human LIFE.

At present, the unborn do not even possess a voice by which to decry their slayers. We are their voice in this world. I say, let us band together in the unity of our Lord Jesus Christ to let the injustice be known.

I refer you to the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention for worldwide statistics on abortion: http://www.abortiontv.com/Misc/AbortionStatistics.htm#Abortions%20Worldwide


   
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