The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, I like this one... So much imagination is packed into this poem!
01/30/09
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful.
I love the connection to the wardrobe and the invitation to adventure and enchantment through the imagination of the soul.
02/03/09
This is SO creative, so magical, so well done. I think you truly captured the essence of the wonder of the wardrobe. LOVED IT!
02/05/09
Congrats on placing in the EC.. beautiful story about the famous wardrobe... loved the imagery. Very creative idea.
02/05/09
Nicely done! However, I miss the rhythm and flow of Traditional poetry. (Of course, that's just my personal preference and doesn't take away from the words or sentiment.) I still enjoyed the read and "Congratulations" for placing in Winners Circle.
Congratulations on placing with this lovely poem. The imagery is beautiful.
02/05/09
LOVELY! In my imagination, I entered the enchanted wardrobe through your wonderfully-written piece! My favorite stanza was:
"This is no mere piece of furniture;
Enchantment hangs within
Among the furs and cloaks
Smelling faintly of mothballs."
CONGRATULATIONS on your E.C. win!! :)
This is lovely. I enjoyed the description and relived my own Narnia experience as I read your words. Congratulations!
02/08/09
I love what you did with this... how creative...! Congrats on your EC, Emily!