The Official Writing Challenge
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01/30/09
Good story, but think this writing could be expanded a bit to give the reader a fuller understanding of your Prince--the King of Kings.
01/30/09
Oooh, definitely expand this--a beautiful allegory based on Scripture.

I'm afraid it might be "off topic" for this geographical theme--it was supposed to be the UK on the map, not a spiritual kingdom.

Nevertheless, your passionate heart for the ultimate united kingdom was very apparent!
The bride waiting for her groom. How romantic this is. Expand please, I'd love to read more.