The Official Writing Challenge
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01/31/09
Oh, very good. It took me a bit to realize when this was but when I did, it really hit me. Great job building emotion.
02/03/09
Very real emotion here, and a camaraderie that was made very clear in the narrative. Beautiful.
Your story really brings to life the fear and horror caused by "misdirected loyalties."
This brought back long forgotten feelings of the comeraderie felt after those attacks.