The Official Writing Challenge
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01/30/09
I'd love to live in a village like this and meet characters that have these kinds of personalities and histories. Fun read!
02/01/09
What a wonderful job you've done with the personalities especially. A delightful read!
The voice of your mc's voice really brought her to life, and I enjoyed the visit to village celebration.
02/03/09
LOVE the voice of this character!

I found the present tense a little bit off-putting here, as it changes scenery a few times. Probably just me.

It's always fun to read about someone who gets her comeuppance, and this was no exception!
02/03/09
I think I know your MC, lol. Great voice. Well done.