The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, I really like this one... I love Scottish history, and the way you mixed in poetry was really neat... Wonderful job!
01/31/09
I loved the character of Agnes!

Avoid using '&' for 'and' in your narrative--a very minor fix.

Cute story!
I'm with Agnes. A pile of rocks?
This was educational and fun.
That last poem, though, wow, I need a translater...*smile*
While I enjoyed the characters of William AND Agnes, this story disappoints me. The idea was so much better than the final story - which borders on a history report feel to me. AND I would have thought an & symbol would have been caught before hitting the submit button - which is extremely frustrating.