The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 597 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
01/29/09
It's a good thing your MC is Dutch or you might get too soon clobbered! LOL. Yes, you are right; found it by title alone. Very clever way to work the topic into the story. Can't wait till the topic challenge is Holland to see what you create!
01/31/09
Cute--this would work for "the Netherlands", too! I enjoyed the banter here.

The narrator's longest speech didn't seem entirely natural to me--more like she was reading a report.

The rest of the story--delightful, and I love the relationship between the two characters (and the last line).
Love, love, love the ending. I was getting all serious then you got me. *giggling*