The Official Writing Challenge
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01/31/09
Wow, what a vacation!

I'd really like to see this expanded--the terrorist attack got only one sentence. You had lots more words, and could have helped your reader to experience that with you.

Wonderful message at the end!
02/02/09
I've only been through customs twice, in and out of Nicaragua. Oi, what a trip.