The Official Writing Challenge
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01/31/09
Wow, what a vacation!

I'd really like to see this expanded--the terrorist attack got only one sentence. You had lots more words, and could have helped your reader to experience that with you.

Wonderful message at the end!
I've only been through customs twice, in and out of Nicaragua. Oi, what a trip.