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01/29/09
Lovely story! A very creative plot and beautiful ending.
01/31/09
A romantic story, to be sure!

Some of the timeline and the details seemed a bit muddled to me--I'm especially not clear on the 19 years of lies and where they fit in to the romance.

Your narrator found a wonderful man!
02/02/09
I got a bit confused in there. What had the parents hid from your MC? Also, I am unsure of the 19 years of lies?
This does have the makings of a beautiful romance.
02/03/09
This was a very intriguing romance! I wish there had been more explanation of what initially brought about their arranged marriage, though. I'd love to know more and hope someday you expand it into a much longer short story! Blessings on your writing! :)
02/04/09
Oooo! *Romantic*
I would like more history and details. :)

Watch the spelling and grammar. (wink)