The Official Writing Challenge
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01/31/09
Really wonderful! I wasn't aware of this woman, and I enjoyed every word

One tiny thing--look at the first two words of your first three sentences.

This is one of my favorites so far.
02/02/09
You've done a beautiful job with the MC's voice here. Loved it.

I would have liked to have had one more entry between the last 2, saying when she did get sick or the last entry longer. I felt it ended a little abruptly.
02/02/09
This was captivating,enchanting, and very well written. What an inspirational story.
THe entry speaking of her illness came as a surprise to me. None of the others mentioned it, only of her lack of husband.
I did enjoy the journaling though.
02/05/09
Congrats on your EC...very much deserved!
02/05/09
This was a wonderful glimpse into the heart of a young girl of this place and time. What an inspiring story! CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved E.C.! :)
02/05/09
Congratulations on third place! Good job.
This is really an interesting entry. I enjoyed the fictionalized true story very much. Congratulations!
02/08/09
I love ready diaries... Congrats on your EC!