The Official Writing Challenge
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Great flow and an awesome read. Other then the title I wouldn't have guessed the theme. But then again it could just be me.

Write On! Blessings on your writing.

<>< Trina
01/31/09
I like the echoed last line--it makes this seem like a song.

I think the intent of this week's prompt was to write about the geographical United Kingdom, not the spiritual one.

But this is a VERY good poem!
This is a very neat poem.
02/20/09
I like the way you played on "United Kingdom"...."Kingdom United." Amen, great job!