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01/29/09
Great descriptions, especially of Scotland. Wish I would have read your story before I wrote mine! Good job!
01/29/09
Ahhhh, I can't wait to go.... great descriptions and nice form, very casual.
01/29/09
Your story brought back memories of my sister's time in Scotland...except she was on the verge of tears whenever she had to drive there! :-) Excellent descriptions, and your warm tone conveys the warmth you felt on your visit.
01/31/09
I really got a kick out of this--when I was in England, one of the things that constantly delighted and surprised me was the many, many differences in the "same" language. This was lots of fun to read.
Your beginning was quite comical, especially the plane and the train incidents. Very descriptive and fun to read and learn.