The Official Writing Challenge
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01/31/09
A precious story--I loved imagining the Irish setting and accents.

A quick note (maybe a typo)--It's O'Hare Airport. I noticed some errors in punctuation that, if edited, would bump up the quality of the story just a bit.

Love the character of the grandmother.
This sounds a lot to me like a journal entry, which I think is cool; especially from the viewpoint of a 13 year old girl.