The Official Writing Challenge
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No divine guidance needed to take off a jacket or even to recognize a possible second husband. I enjoyed your story very much...would lie to read more.
I really enjoyed your portrayal of her reaction to the heat and when the door smashed her in the face.
Sorry, I hit enter before I was finished.
YOur descriptions were very vivid anyway. I enjoyed this very much.
01/27/09
Great descriptions - and I loved the atmosphere, especially in the first half.