The Official Writing Challenge
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01/22/09
Good story start. Love to hear the rest of the book? You did a oood job of teaching something about the country, in the midst of an interesting story line.
I like how you tucked a surprise at the end of this interesting story. Excellent writing.
01/26/09
Delightful!
I had a feeling Helen was up to something. I liked the ending.
01/26/09
You certainly captured her enthusiasm! Very nice character development, as well as a lesson in the bandicoot. :) Enjoyed the read!