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Topic: Australia or New Zealand (01/15/09)
TITLE: Mrs. Peale's Writing Assignment
By Sheri Gordon
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Weekly Writing #12
The place I most want to go in the hole wide world is Astrallia. I have wanted to go there for my hole life because they have cute kola bears in all the trees and I want to hug one. I have a stufed kola bear from the zoo and his name is Koly and he sits on my bed when I make it wich I donít do every day and then my mom gets mad.
In Astrallia there are kola bears in all the trees so you have to be carefull going under the trees because sometimes they jump on you. I donít think they want to hurt you but they just want to play. But they have long claws so sometimes they hurt you even if they donít mean to.
Another reason I want to go to Astrallia is because they have kangarooz that hop down the street. You have to be carefull when you go in the stores because if the kangarooz get inside there humungus tails will nock everything over and then you have to pay for it. Or they might punch things like a boxer because they do that with there arms wich is kind of funny because there arms are so short.
Another thing about kangarooz is that they keep there babys in a pocket. And when they donít have a baby they keep food like carots and snacks and stuff in there pocket. I donít no if they have kangaroo treats in Astrallia but they should so that kids could feed them to the kangarooz like I give treats to my doggy named Scooter and like we feed the goats at the zoo so thats why I think there needs to be kangaroo treats.
Another reason I want to go to Astrallia is because I would get to ride on a plane and daddy says that there are tvs and bags of peenuts on the plane. A thing I donít like about Astrallia is it is on the bottom of the world and I might get a headake from being up side down because I get headakes when I hang up side down on the swings. But Astrallia is still the place I want to go most in the hole wide world.
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