The Official Writing Challenge
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You presented a lesson that will remain "un-taught," but I enjoyed a good laugh from your efforts. The ending was just right.
01/26/09
Also love the title, and the end. Great voice for both characters, but especially the MC.
Hilariously fun. The dialogue and the many attempts of the wife go applauded by this professional self-depricator.
01/26/09
I had to smile are your helpmate" hat. :) Oh my, the ice-cubes down the back that almost ended your engagement. LOL You are definitely a help to your husband. I LOVE the way you think! I totally enjoyed this!
I am the master of self-deprecation, so it's hard for me to imagine someone that can't do it to themselves. LOL. This was a fun story. Very well written and engaging. Thank you for sharing.
01/28/09
I loved the characters here! Very fun story.
Oh, this was fun. I enjoyed both characters.
01/28/09
I'm thinking this man may not get along very well with the Aussies. Love the lines about his glasses, and how the MC wanted to steal them.
01/28/09
This was so entertaining! Great wit. Loved it...