The Official Writing Challenge
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01/24/09
You presented a lesson that will remain "un-taught," but I enjoyed a good laugh from your efforts. The ending was just right.
01/26/09
Also love the title, and the end. Great voice for both characters, but especially the MC.
01/26/09
Hilariously fun. The dialogue and the many attempts of the wife go applauded by this professional self-depricator.
01/26/09
I had to smile are your helpmate" hat. :) Oh my, the ice-cubes down the back that almost ended your engagement. LOL You are definitely a help to your husband. I LOVE the way you think! I totally enjoyed this!
01/27/09
I am the master of self-deprecation, so it's hard for me to imagine someone that can't do it to themselves. LOL. This was a fun story. Very well written and engaging. Thank you for sharing.
01/28/09
I loved the characters here! Very fun story.
01/28/09
Oh, this was fun. I enjoyed both characters.
01/28/09
I'm thinking this man may not get along very well with the Aussies. Love the lines about his glasses, and how the MC wanted to steal them.
01/28/09
This was so entertaining! Great wit. Loved it...