The Official Writing Challenge
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01/22/09
I love the ending—she was soooo worried they would give her a hard time! The dialogue was great.
01/22/09
Nothing else to be said, except this was brilliant.
I enjoyed this wonderful story for the humor, the family love, and the excellent writing.
01/25/09
Wonderful dialogue, and I really like the relationships here.

FYI: The word "wherefore" really means "why" rather than "where". When Juliet says "Wherefore art thou Romeo?", she asing why he has that name, not where he is.

The ending? Awesome!
I rather liked the story, although I felt bad for the girl's anguish over how her grandparents would feel. I'm glad it turned out so well.
I like the love story and the hard of hearing grandfather in this. I wasn't sure how it was going to end, but I'm glad that the grandparents approved. :)
01/26/09
Awww....what a sweet story. Well done!
01/29/09
I enjoyed reading your story and loved the hard-of-hearing grandfather! CONGRATULATIONS on your EC! :)