The Official Writing Challenge
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Beautiful poem!
01/25/09
I loved your poem. The words and images were so descriptive. I had the sense that while we love this land/earth we are on, we still long for that heavenly home.
01/25/09
Gorgeous, Emily!
01/25/09
I love the repetition and the gorgeous imagery. Lovely poem...
So beautiful, loved it.
01/25/09
Beautiful imagery and great descriptions. I could feel that dust under my feet!
01/25/09
Beautiful imagery and soothing rhythm. I especially like the repeated single line, changing with each stanza. Nice!
01/26/09
Beautiful and lovely in its imagery and form!
Beautifully written. I loved your word choices and thought the ending was stunning.
This is such a beautiful, vivid poem... It is one of my favorite pieces that I've read so far!
Oh, and I really love that ending... :-)