The Official Writing Challenge
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Ugh! Lost at sea, I'd hate to wake up to find me in enemy waters...
I enjoyed reading about this adventure.
01/25/09
This was an interesting story. I know nothing about the sea so don't know if it's possible but it made for a good story anyway:) The college student's language changed in the middle - it almost felt like a different person talking. You need to watch that. Good job overall.