The Official Writing Challenge
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01/15/09
Very nice.
01/15/09
Love your use of internal rhyme!
01/20/09
Great job with a difficult rhyme and meter scheme. Wow! I really appreciated your use of words like , "abscond" and "wide raging foam" so picturesque! I hope you get your wish!