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01/16/09
Wow, what a great way to spend the 4th! I can almost see the fireworks as you described them.
Congratulations on sharing this visual experience so clearly in your words
I was looking out the window with you and loving the display. Well done.
01/20/09
Really cool concept--I can just picture that hours-long fireworks display!
Very visual...great job.
01/21/09
How awesome! I hope this is true - I LOVE the idea of watching fireworks from the air. Loved this.
03/23/09
Sharlyn - were you really in my home town? I'm so glad I discovered this story of yours. I loved going on this journey with you--you made it so real. 4th of July sounds like a perfect time to be above the fireworks!

Thank you, too, for finding my short story and leaving a comment. I always appreciate your taking notice.