The Official Writing Challenge
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01/15/09
Good poetic skills--rhyme and meter spot on.
01/16/09
Your poetic words about the Once Lovely USA are sad...but true.

What once upon a time began as a Nation Under God, has now turned it's back on "the One Who stood beside her and guided her through the night with a light from above." Nicely done, and although it breaks the hearts of Americans to read about it...it's all true. Thanks for telling it like it is, and sharing it with us.
01/16/09
The flow of this poem is excellent; the point is well made; and I pray that Christians everywhere will each do their part in standing up for God. Thanks.
01/20/09
Beautiful poetic language and wonderful skill displayed!