The Official Writing Challenge
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from "I am the flag" to "I am the U.S.A." was beautifully written, so moving. So please accept the following with its kind intention: I found that the intro and the concluding words detracted from the rest of the piece. You have a great way with words...keep writing.
Very well-done personification of America. I enjoyed it.
Oh, I really like the metaphor of the flag! Great job!