The Official Writing Challenge
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What a creative way to say thank you to our veterans. This held my interest, and I enjoyed reading it.
Love her complete change of mood, and the wonderful message. The last line was just right,too.
Good job with the change of spirit here--it didn't feel at all forced to me, but realistic and touching.
So creative! Wonderful combination of suspense and entertainment weaved with American pride.