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01/15/09
Good exhortation!
01/15/09
Good cautionary essay.

I felt that it rambled a bit, and there were a few mixed metaphors. Maybe more focus would help?

I don't think it's too late!
01/16/09
Good message--and I truly believe it's not too late to turn the tide--but America must remember its roots and repent for turning away from God.
I think the last four paragraphs could be omitted because your point was strongly made prior to these.
Thanks for saying what needs to be said.