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Very interesting speculative fiction. Sure wish you had more words!
Though this is fiction, the reader knows there's lots of truth here. A creative take on the topic made this an interesting read. Thanks.
Hey. . . I like this . . . Seriously!

It was unique and interesting. It captured my attention and held my curiosity to the end. I'd give it a thumbs up. :)
Oooh, how fun. I did like this. I liked the ending best though with the "New U.S.A." and how the title fit in. I can definitely see this as something happening in real life...because of choices we make and never know what will happen. Amazing job with this! ^_^
OK, once I got past the title (which did confuse me at first, but with a bit of effort was very clever) I really enjoyed this story. The dialogue was good, very childlike when it needed to be and I enjoyed the glimpses into the MC's thoughts about how to respond, etc. Very good lesson and a hopeful ending - nice.