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01/16/09
Enjoyed your piece. I had to smile as I was reminded of some of the many trips I have taken with and without children in tow.
Somehow, as we look back, it is all these little "side trips" that make for good storytelling.
01/17/09
Hehe - cute and clever. Enjoyed this very much. I love the pizza thread woven through. Creative.
You presented an interesting travelog,your undertone of humor keeping it moving right along.
Oh the joys of driving to Florida! Done it more times than I wanted to visiting my folks.
01/20/09
Love the voice here--witty and fun.
What a miserable trip! But you made it fun and humerous for me- the reader. I really enjoyed this article. :)