The Official Writing Challenge
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01/16/09
Awesome. I was wondering if anyone would write on this topic. Great use of vivid words; I was right there with Amber.

Blessings on your writing.
01/16/09
Absolutely engaging and breathtakingly intense. I also wondered if anyone would use this idea for the topic, and you did an incredible job with it.
01/17/09
Your gripping, exceptionally well written story had me holding my breath.
01/18/09
Excellent suspense. I really wondered if she'd get out. Did you deliberately not name the place she was trapped in to make us have to follow the trail of clues? I have to admit, that at first read, I put Amber in a different location until the end. Guess I'm a little slow. ;-) I Like how you portrayed Aden, the rescuer.
01/19/09
Very well told...
01/20/09
Very well written--especially strong in atmosphere, mood, setting. May be one of my favorites of yours.
01/20/09
very, very well told - from the title to the end. It felt as though I were there with her. :)
01/21/09
Great, vivid descriptions and mood. I was right there with her. Ummmm, since I'm not American I may not get right away where this is (I'm taking a guess as to where and when, but I am not 100%). Maybe it's just me, but a bit more transparency as to the location may be helpful for some.
01/21/09
Incredible! Your first person account of this is truly riveting. The detail, right down to her own fight for life, is so vivid; I felt as though I were there holding her hand.
02/18/09
Wow! I felt like I was right there in the rubble with Amber.