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01/15/09
Excellent use of acrostic--and I love the rhyme scheme, the careful meter, and your love for the country which shows through despite its cautionary tone.
01/21/09
I've always love acrostics. You have excellent thoughts, "It seems she's sliding steeply from her prime. The leaders humanistic mantras give." You title is thought-provoking! Your ending verse is so relevant for today!
01/26/09
Wow! wonderful thoughts, interesting rhyming pattern, and creative form! Thank you for writing this... although it makes me sad.