The Official Writing Challenge
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12/11/08
Very unique and interesting entry, and I learned something important from it. The gift that the Magi brought, for instance, was oil for the deceased; something I had forgotten, but when your story reminded me - it brought tears to my eyes. Nicely done!

(PS: Did you mean cocoa? or is this a new drink?) (*.*)!
12/11/08
Creative way to allow the neighbor to share the gospel while participating in a neighborhood tradition. Good job.
12/16/08
Interesting story with a great message.
12/16/08
Nice angle. Creative story, with lots of little details to bring it to life, like the tradition of the gingerbread men. I wanted to write something about the reason being His death not his bith, but you did it VERY well. Nice!!